Aw... this si cuch a sad poem! 4/5

I loved it. Very emotional and moving.

Pete

Such a beautiful poem. it was so sad at the end but the start felt so sweet. loved it

Thanks for commenting :) knew youd like it :) im glad u like variety....

It was really good, i mean that you would want to spend the rest of your life with one person,and to find happiness with them for the rest of your time on earth

Wow....i totally cried. that is so cute, and so sad, beautifully written. that was gorgeous. oo wow. honestly amazing. deinfitely a 5. if i could give you a ten i would. fantastic!

Very very nice poem!!!! Lovin your poems
Thanks for commenting on one of mine

Thats sad. but also very cute.

Awww.. that was so cute. i loved it. thanks for teh comment on my poem- it meant a lot. take care.

~*amber

Wow, so sad, brought a tear to my eyes. why can't you grow old with him though?

Wow! Holy crap that was amazing! It was so emotional and expressed such a huge bond of love and kindness and caring. You wrote that extremely well!
5/5!

-Mikochan

Amazing poem. at first it didn't quite capture me but near the end i was fully captured by this poem. it brought tears to my eyes. it's just filled with such beautiful and sweet understanding emotions while facing death. wonderful job~

~Jacklyn

At first I was going to not read this one but I did and it was pretty good. Got more emotional towards the ending then the start of it. The last line was pretty good too.

P.s if you can and want to please check out some of mine.