by Cait Aug 23, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
When you leave for school, |
by Natalie84
When I first started reading I won't lie I was like what the hell is this...but I LOVE IT! So creative and unique. I love the way it flowed without rhyme. I love reading stuff like this...people stepping outside of the 'norm' and writing of something so different. I like how you compared the old teddy bar to an old wise man...the jack to a class clown....very good comparison....What a wonderful write... Very nicely done!!! :) |