When I first started reading I won't lie I was like what the hell is this...but I LOVE IT! So creative and unique. I love the way it flowed without rhyme. I love reading stuff like this...people stepping outside of the 'norm' and writing of something so different. I like how you compared the old teddy bar to an old wise man...the jack to a class clown....very good comparison....What a wonderful write... Very nicely done!!! :)