This is great. lobve the comparison

Wow, this is great :D
Nothing bad to say :(
The flow was great, it was simple yet meaningful, its a great idea..
I really liked it :(
Your getting better each poem :)

Good luck with the next one :D

x)

So true.. ive never heard it expressed like this,.. and thats what poems are/do.. very good job.. loved the first stanza.. and the whole deeper deeper thing,.. in a way.. it could be a double entendre if u changed it up.. lol but 5/5 u got from me