That was very good i give you a 5/5... amazing job....

This one was reli gud too.. i lykd the new topic and the words u chose and the imagery and how u pictures that day gr8 goin
keep it ups
take care

AMAZING. a bit scary...gives me feeling of emptiness, as if the echoing sound of the clock was the only thing inside, and the only thing holiding the bodu together...anyway...*wakes out of trance* its fantastic, i love the form, and the way it gets shorter, and at the end, the words really do just fade away...it's so good it's scary. I LOVE IT.
~madfry~

Please give me some tips of how you writie your poems so good, i'm forever writing poems but none of them i have written are as good as any of yours.

xx-Heavenzeyez-xx

Wow this is such an iteresting poem.... i love how it still alot to the imagination..... I love how it flows.. and the structure of it..
WELL DONE.......

Thank you so much for your comment on my poem..........

hope to read more of your poems bye

Wow great poem 5/5

Wow! thats very imaginative! i never would related to two things! its great!

I think this is a great poem my little turnip! It's really original and clever. I especially love the last verse, really really really good!

Such an orginal subject! Well the death part isn't, but the whole clock ticking away thing is GREAT! It's sad but so simple and beautiful.....