A very wonderful poem, but very sad. I hope you don't really kill yourself. I loved this poem, and I know how hard it is to deal with a loved one committing suicide. It hurts, and, will continue to hurt, around the time of their death for wuite a while. But eventually, you will look back at all the wonderful times you had, and actually crack a smile, instead of a tear. Try to hang in there dear. Very touching poem, by the way. 5/5

Kalika

Hey this was so sad, stay strong..sorry about your friend :)

Sorry

Gd poem but very sad. dont even think of suicide its not worth it it just leaves more behind who will feel the same way. xox

Awesome poem, but plz do'nt do wht ur telling in the poem.....someone's always ther 4 u, IM....if u nedd 2 tlk 2 any1 contact me. lokk gurl i kw it an'it easy but u gotta hold on. we r only given 1 life to live, so plz live it. it is a percious gift and u have 2 save it, trust me i kw. TAKE CARE
Loads of luv,
Noziyna

Great poem.5/5.yeah but dont kill yourself,you've got other people that love you .

Don't give up. I'm sure that Danny wouldn't want you too. Just think of you and all the good times. When September comes just hang in there.

Keep it up and stay strong.
5/5

Aww darling you cant go..thats not wat danny wud want..i
ve had 9 mates die this year..plz stays trong like i have
gud poem tho very sad n emotional

keep ya head up
-angel-

Hey... that was a truely amazing poem =D... keep up the good work, and maybe could you check some of my stuff out some time...

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Wow, this is really sad. I cried when I read this. I hope you decide not to commit, I know its hard to live when someone you loved and cared about is dead. but you know how hard dannys death was on you. when you die, your death will be this hard to other people. If you need to talk i'm here, just write me up an email. hugs-hayley

Omg this is such a graet poem!!! i actually cried cuz i could totally feel your pain thru your words. and plez plez PLEZ dont kill yourself. i dont think danny would want you to, do you? i certainly dont want you to! i love your poems so much! i hav you on favorites so i can make sure i read all your new poems. and if you killed yourself becuz danny did then maybe on of you close friends will commit than one of there close friends than another. stop the chain here. live for danny. you can do everything she nvr got to experience and she'll be right there next to you enjoying the fun. you can make it thru this. i no you can. i wish you the best of luck and i'm always here if you need anything at all. 5/5 xoxo~lex

Ur poem is great very sad but i loved it keep up the good work and hang in there if u stay strong u will make it through september and many more to come. trust me im going threw the same thing i have lost someone very special to me and its hard especially on those special days we shared to gether and the day i lost him. ive tried the easy way out as people call it but its not so easy. and im sure ur friend would want u to live on and keep them in ur heart always and some day u will be together again but when its ur time. anyways keep up the great work and take care of u. wishing u all the best Melissa

It would be so sad if you really did die, you would be definatly be missed
please stay strong... dont give up
nice poem though, it was as wonderful as ever
you are a great poet 5/5

Oww...that was so sad. i really hope you hold on, as hard as it may be x

OMG NO PLEASE NO DONT DO THAT PLEASE DONT! Your a great poet please don't go. You'll see her when your time comes please email me talk to me anything. You have a purpose and god wants you to stay. Please god bless you don't go. Please. I care about you. And each and everyone of you. Id pray for a whole month for you. Stay... please. Youll see her one day i swear.Oh god ill drop to my knees in this public library dont go. Everyone is important. Say a prayer something. Please email me ok just please. Just please promise me youll pray about it and email me....please. And Danielle will probaly not want this to happen to you. Think about it.

I luv ya's lots and care about you, and so does god
PLZ STAY
Janean.

You are a great poet, it will be a lost if you're gone, but you won't be, right, so keep writing poems cause i can't wait to see more of them, i'll check up your other poems later. uNtIl then, keep writing. Your friend will know, that you misses them.

He never gives more than you can handle. Remember her and be here to carry on her memory. Talk to her and dream of her but don't try to be with her...she's with you already. Excellent write...you surely portrayed friendship and pain...and I honestly don't think she'd want you to come be with her now...for you have a whole life to live. She'll be there when you get there. :) Truly an amazing piece....

I cant understand the cutting. i probably never will. but i can relate, because the month for me is december. all year long, i wait for that month, only to cry all over again.

Please stay. Chin up, and write poetry. You're clearly good at it. Take care.

U are amazing... your stuff is really touching. im so sorry bout Danielle