An interesting idea and a different ending but also very true, one of those things you don't want to talk about. It was a bit distracting in some lines because the lines were cut but it was quite good. Keep it up.
Peace [kt]

This reminds me a lil of some of the stuff i have written, in a totally different light/style.. its a great take on superficiality and i love it,.. i like how u placed the line breaks.. they all seem to be in the perfect place.. good piece..