Very nice, well written. good discriptions

I like that, the flow is great, its alot simpler than some of the others which makes it easier to read, i like your style of writing it takes a few read throughs to understand but its worth it

Amazing, I had to read it twice. I like it alot 5/5

Awesome awesome awesome.

First, I liked:
and trickle into my thoughts
(the path of least resistance)

And then I liked:
were complete as one
completely satisfied.

I really liked all of it, though, not just those two phrases. But those ones stood out as clever and imaginative and unique to me.

I really do enjoy reading your work. It most definitely is not a hard thing; going through and reading your poetry!