by Drew Gold Aug 24, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I breathe my love and i taste your flesh |
by Jason Meres
I liked this one a great deal, and know that in no way am I being critical, simply suggestive. I've seen such wonderful words from you, there doesn't seem to be any reason why you'd "slang" it all down(You = u, etc...) I'd love to see you tap into a more eloquent side, I think you could be a thousand times better, and you're certainly great as it is. |
by wendy
Thank you for the comment i realy like your poems also |
by Loves poison
Interesting.. good job though |