by Drew Gold Aug 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The tribal drums beat wildly |
by Kara
I love it! You an incredible writter keep it up!!! |
by Vegetable
This is one of the best poems i've read in a while. The rythm almost soundls like "wildly beating tribale drums" Did you mean to do that? Though it feels like the last line brakes up the beat a little. You are a truley great writter. You never came out and said anything bluntly. i admire that very much. my favorite line is "you're far but near, and its hardly clear, who could have forced this change?" |
by Emilia
Wow. great!! 5/5! |