by katie! Aug 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The days grow ever longer as I lie alone my dear |
Resplendent write, very nice!!! |
A unique rymeing scheme. |
by Jacklyn
I love the poem, i have read better but this one is still very good! i love the last line it closes it up pretty well and makes the poem feel complete, because some poems don't do that but your very good at getting it to. gret job putting the emotions through. take care |
Very nice poem.keep up the good work. |