by Jenny Aug 24, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Dad don't you know you cause me pain. I hate this feeling it brings me so much shame! You say I'm worthless and ill never succeed. how can you say that, you never gave me a chance to show that i can achieve my dreams! |
by Spitfire
I love that!! |
by jamie25
Wow...very powerfull...i felt the pain in every line..great write very sad..i hope it isnt true..but if it is...i know how you feel ..been there..just keep writing it is a very good venting tool i know from experience:) |
That is a good poem i really like it. just wondering is it a true storey? |
by Ashley
Great poem. Sad poem but i still liked how well it flowed. Keep writing you're good at it!! |
by Hurtingsoul
Amazing poem i actually could even feel yor pain im so sorry |