OMG! I swear I would cry right now if no one was around. That is the saddest thing I've read in a long time. I'm sooo sorry. That's just terrible...*Hugs*.

This is brilliant. I loved how you rhymed and for some reason the way you kept saying 'dad' just made it even more powerful. I'm sorry if this is true, and even if it isn't its still heartbreaking, because it does happen. Oi. Great write...take care.

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx

Amazing poem i actually could even feel yor pain im so sorry
the first two stanzas caught my eyes great flow too
take care
HS

Great poem. Sad poem but i still liked how well it flowed. Keep writing you're good at it!!

That is a good poem i really like it. just wondering is it a true storey?

Wow...very powerfull...i felt the pain in every line..great write very sad..i hope it isnt true..but if it is...i know how you feel ..been there..just keep writing it is a very good venting tool i know from experience:)

I love that!!

ITS SO SAD
MY DAD IS LIKE THAT!!

it hurts i know
sorry bout ur pain!

GREAT JOB !
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