Wooow! I am literally lost for words and don't know what to say. This is a manificent piece of artistry and poetry at it's best Truly outstanding and amazing.

Warm regards,

Steve

Jacki,
WOW...truly amazing piece...truly one that needs to be recognized. Awesome...

hugs, love, Ann

Thank you guys, I almost thought people had forgotten that I even write poetry untill recently when I started to get comments again :)

But thanks so much for the wonderful comments.

This poem has a beautiful flow, once again amazing imagery. sad, but it still warmed my heart, i loved it.
mwahh,
aylz

Amazing poem! so well written and unique. the imergry is fantastic. the flow seamless and it really captures the reader from begining to end.

You inspire me... this is very amazing and fantastic,the message is great! its not boring to read very enjoyable... keep on writing i beleive, u do it well thanks....

Oh my gosh. this is definitelt one of the very BEST poems i have ever read. it is soo amazingly descriptive. i lov some of the similies, like the one, " my heart pounding like a tribe dancing" or something like that. i really love that. incredible work. honestly, on a scale of 1-10, this poem is a 23. i'm not even joking. it's really that good. ok. i've said a mouthfull. so bye.