by lisa marie Aug 25, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What is happiness? |
I see by the ratings that you went over the heads of some voters 5>>>>>>>>> |
by Lydie
Good poem... However -I do this but I'm fixing all my poems - the capitals at the begining of each line get a bit annoying... and if it's a question, then it should end in a question mark!? And also using commas helps break the poem a bit better making it easier to read |
by Lisa
I luv ur name (lisa marie) |