I luv ur name (lisa marie)
its mine to
pimpin' poems
later

Good poem... However -I do this but I'm fixing all my poems - the capitals at the begining of each line get a bit annoying... and if it's a question, then it should end in a question mark!? And also using commas helps break the poem a bit better making it easier to read
however it's your own style and i can't tell you what to do... and half the time i do the same thing!

Pretty well written!

-Lyd

I see by the ratings that you went over the heads of some voters 5>>>>>>>>>