by Tainted Butterfly Aug 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Harboring the pain of a raging storm |
So beautifully written...your word choice/phrasing is wonderful...and the words seem to be filled with wisdom and experience...fantastic! |
by Razorblade
Very deep and meaningful! Terrific job! |
by LE MARQUIS
Very nice... Bravo! |
by Synyster
Nice. I like the flow of this poem and the way you worded things. Beautiful work. (I LOVED this line!: "time will teach wings don't break, but bend. |
Great use of words and rhyming. godo job, it was really well done! |