by Drew Gold
Liked this one,.. it flowed pretty well,.. there wasnt a consistent rhyme scheme, but i did notice a few lines the blended together, not necessarily rhyming, just going good together, sounding similar but not rhymes.. pretty cool.. 4/5.. |
by wendy
Why so many sad poems..........good but so sad |
by Lenny
Soo sad, soo true, great poem |
by Amanda
This one is so sad and like i said before - talk to your friends. Try to talk to someone you trust :) |
by Justin
Great job, that is really sad but well written, good job,5/5 |
by Vegetable
This poem is really good. The flow is really good, my favorite line is "The endless river of tears" Good work 5/5 |