Wow. this was really really good. its so ...meaning full. awesome job 5/5

Woah. this is really good. I like this part the best
"My sweet angel
Please whisper unheard words
Your prescence is all I need
For your love is all I seek"

I can't figure out why its a "sad" poem though... good job 5/5

Wowits a beautiful poem. Greatly written, it has a nice flow to it! Definate 5! Great job!

Ther eyou go!! thats definately a 5/5!! the emotion was there, thats the biggest key in this one, and this kind of a poem, and the flow was perfect, so this is like..your best ont 5/5! no suggestoins here!

Wow thats beautiful, a really lovely poem good job

Aww that's cute.

Your friends are very lucky so keep smiling

Your friends are very lucky so keep smiling

Wow your friends are like angels, they help you thorugh so much. its a nice poem, very nice 5/5

Yeah you can definitely tell it was straight from the heart. Nicely Written. Check out some of mine if you wish :) Xx Peace xX

Deep and wonderful i really enjoyed this one keep up the great work ..you rock5/5

Great job on detail and capturing the meaning behind it!!! 5/5

Keep up the good work.

Emma4/5

Wow, i love it. can relate to it too.XxXkeep up the good work:) maybe you cud check out sum of my poems if you get chance:)

Graceful flow...nice form....friends are important, and it is lovely to write about them, showing love and appreciation in your friendships...your words are sweet...

Thank you ever so much for the compliments, I'm glad you enjoyed those pieces of mine...especially "Unknowable apology." And, of course, it could be a song. Make it whatever you wish. If someone put it to music, I would love to hear it too ;)

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