It isn't shitty, whoever rated it a 3 is a meanie. :-). It's a great intro and it has me incredibly excited for the rest! Hurry! Haha. Love you hun, take care and post soon. :-). *hugs*

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx

COONAY! I like this! I LOVE IT ACTUALLY....You decribed her so well. So well that I pictured a couple of people I went to school with...lol The only thing is you left me hanging. "little do they know,
all of what "that girl" has known all along." It doesn't seem to be a complete thought...Maybe you were going for an ending like this... to have the reader wandering how ever I think that is a little too broad....anyhoo...I did like it...now I'm off to read the other one...