by Delo
OMG lol u write about food :) your making me hungry and i'm already hungry now |
Amazing rytin... u captured perfectly how ard it is 2 eat that last jam tart even if u do treasure it!! lmao u mad ed!!! food obsessed comes 2 mind but its gd n e wayz!! |
by Jaime
Haha thats good-- I was about to complain that it was in the wrong category lol. Nicely written! |
Nicee. |
Seriously wot r u on??? calm urself darling! lol. i 4t u luved pies neways? idiot... |
LMFAO |
by poetals
Lol, very good poem |
by ScarletHaze
Lmao |
by Ana Vidovic
AWW i love the wording in this, really meaningful! Great job!!! 5/5 |
I really liked your poem,It was funny.I give you mad props...Uhh so yea I really liked it..Make another funny one!!Cuz ur good at it. |
by Deathcanwait
She ate ur jam tart? :| i got slightly confused but it was still rather gooood. nice job. |
by Laloser05
LOL!!!!..... very funny :D |
by Mallory Vn
Ahh i love it, i never knew these sorts a poems could crack me up like they are.. keep it going.. part 2 part 2.. |
by Greedy
Hahahahaha! I loved your poem! I know how you feel about eating your last jam tart..lol. I love your poems! |
LMFAO......... good poem I liked it |
Lol sorry ryan luv u really x x x |
by JLT
Roflmao! Nice! It's great. lol omg, where do you come up with this stuff? I love it lol. Keep it up babe *hugs* |
by Vicky
Lol dat was a gud poem! lol it is hard 2 eat the last jam tart init? i no how u feel. i reely like dat poem lol |
by Kayleen
Very good it made my mum read it again lol |
by sinister
K..........., well............... i really dont know what else to say. |