Sure people can relate to this...but it makes me think of how many people cheat...doesn't sound like cheating in this technically...but I wonder how much you can care for the bf when you fall for another...it's all a part of love I guess...heartache comes along with it...

Nicely done.

xxx

This poem was good...in parts. You told the story in the poem well, and stated everything you needed to without going over the top, it flowed from stanza to stanza too.
The rhyming however through out most of the poem seemed forced and the rhymes that you did have are over used in the "poetry world".
Keep writing.

Wow, i definatly know how you feel. went through it time and again. you captured it perfectly! i loved it! keep up the greath work!
lia jnell

Now that was awsome! Truely a peace i enjoyed reading!5/5

Yes, sad that you have to decide. I dont think that having 2 boyfriends is right. There's always a harsh choice and a cruel decision after the truth is out.
I have no idea if the whole story line is true, and of it isnt then you did a mighty good job in making it seem like it was.

Good Writing!
beth

Day-uhmm.
really well written and i hate to say it, but pretty funny. in a bad way. not good! but good at the same time....
good job!