Great poem.. very good.. I voted a 5 on this one.. please check out my new poem "my 2 boyfriends" it would mean so much if you commented and voted.. thanks a lot.. hugs!

Pretty deep poem. The rhymes were good, but the 2nd verse didn't flow well. The rest of it was great. good job :)

Thats a really good way to show how you feel I liekd it very much!

You could feel the emotion of this poem! it's really good
"I am waiting for a finger
To read along the lines
To know what it's like
In this lonely world of mine."
that is my fav. part. Good Job 5/5

I liked there were a few points at wich i got,lost, but i really loved it its really deep and sincitive, Great job 4/5

I Can Relate To This Poem 101% 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo