by MisterScabbedWings Aug 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
The mood is set right |
by HeatherG
The ending was funny. the whole poem was really good full of emotion. you kinda got me hot for a second. |
by lil D
Thats hott |
by Loves poison
HAHA!!! the ending surprised me... I got caught up in the moment i wasn't even expecting that lolVery good the emotion was very bold this was my favorite out of ur poems (^_^) ....Very good job once agian |
by Adrienne Day
Amazing i didnt think it was possible to write anything hotter than"Our unforgettable sin" but you have! great job!! i love it! |
Oh yeah...forgot, Its really HOT!!! But I still think its nice (lol)...thanks for sharing this poem with us on the site |