Awesome poem, I just love it. I love how you put feelings into it, it's so true and honest...like it alot! Keep up the good work, I will be looking up some more of your poems. :-) Nice poem!

Oh yeah...forgot, Its really HOT!!! But I still think its nice (lol)...thanks for sharing this poem with us on the site

Amazing i didnt think it was possible to write anything hotter than"Our unforgettable sin" but you have! great job!! i love it!

HAHA!!! the ending surprised me... I got caught up in the moment i wasn't even expecting that lolVery good the emotion was very bold this was my favorite out of ur poems (^_^) ....Very good job once agian

Thats hott

The ending was funny. the whole poem was really good full of emotion. you kinda got me hot for a second.