That was really good! short lines were really effective like made it not linger on! a really good write! like it! its sad tho...memories of people should NEVER be forgotten

I agree with monique 'God be with us yet, lest we forget, lest we forget'
Cool topic is it a true story or....
-love to know,

----Lenny

Thanks for the comments and this is a true story! My friend Heather Wartenbe died in a car wreck this summer and I wrote this for her!

Excellent -- consider posting this poem on the artistic poetry contests located on the discussion board

How true. What a great insight.