Oh that was so sad!! i felt the words came from your heart.
i hope you guys sort it out, you sound more like mr. right to me. don't blame it all on you..please...especially if it's medical stuff.
take care and keep writing.
xoxoxoo

Hi joey
this one was very sad, but i'm sure things can get better.. "torn apart" is right, u sound more like mr. right than mr. wrong, because whatever u did u regret it, and that's the right thing to do. i'm sure things are gonna get better, cause i know u are a great person, even though i don't know u, there's a great person reflected on your poems.

take care,

p i l i

Joey,
even in your times of deepest sorrow, you are still able to write. In fact, I think that is one of the best poems i've read by you in a LONG time. Don't worry hunn, this will get better. and don't blame yourself. I don;t want to sound like a broken record, but pilar and torn apart are SO right, you're definently not her mr. wrong. Hang in there!

With great Admiration,
Tristan

PS I need to ask you a quetion ( i need a guys opinion again) like the one you helped me with before...

tris124@msn.com...thanks!