by void. Aug 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Travel-worn, weathered and weary |
It's very nice and very good, thanks for your comment, okay, okay, i changed it into Beat of my heart, i know my english sucks, if you are free, do you mind correcting my poems which are wrong in grammar or words, THANKS, you have been a great help. |
by Justin
That was execellent.. you write wonderfully well... carry on.. |
by void.
I think I go by the ones I understand the most. Sometimes I just pour out my feelings without understanding them. The ones I feature tend to be those that I have sat and pondered and muddled over before writing. Thanks for the suggestion. I'll feature this one. Glad you like it! |
This is my fav from you yet. :D but i cant give you advice because my style is so different from yours! |