Nice i like it. it's so sad though.
it really stands out what youre trying to get across.
feel better :)

Wow i really like this, i like the repitition

Nice work......I love the words you used and how you made it ryme was brilliant:) keep it up

***If you could comment on my poems I would love to hear what you have to say

Well all that i can tell u is yes that u may be diffrent but all at the same time u are the same. u can b strong u can stop your obsessions...u can do alot of things but they are something that grow as u grow and learn from them

I'm commenting again because I love this poem sooooo much, keep up the awesome work!!!!