Pretty cool poem. It was creepy. The rhymes were good, but some verses were a bit off. But still a great poem :)

I love this poem good job 5/5 all the way.

OMG O_O im scared now lol what um is a taljfdsadsajfal whatever that word is....O_o lol anyway good job even though i didnt understand that word it had great rhyming and thats all that matters to me...but not to alot of ppl so dont expect every one to be this nice ;-)

Lol a talamascan is basically a person who say...follows a witch and makes a book out of everything they do. They are forbidden to come in contact with them though. Observe the dark realm, but be not of it.

AHH YES lol i get it now...and hinkle is a guy that i used to have a crush on but now i dont, and thats not his real name just his nickname

Very haunting. I like the simplicity about it and how it speaks volumes in just a few words. great job!

I like it it is great creative