Your End

Ok.. umm why is this poem on here 3 times?..

no offense but isnt that kind of.. idk.bad? .. its a wicked good poem., so any moe who reads anoy of them will vote it high.. so your rating goes up..and they could read 3 diff poems(same poems) and will raise it.. so its kind of not fair.. n/o

This poem was short and straight to the point!

"Now frost covers the ground,
A silent chill rises in the air,
Things are lost that can't be found,
That sheild tears of silent cares."

liked this part!
keep it up!

Your rhyming could use alittle work...air and cares....out and shouts....wiind end....so i gave the poem a 4.....though i loved this poem it was excellent there were a few minor mistakes

Very good short and dark 5/5

Oohh, Chilly. ;)