[Tragic] Suicide.

by avery   Aug 25, 2005


She walks down the halls,
Holding her books tight,
Looking down on the floor,
Something's not right.

She gets home from school,
And darkens her eyes,
Blood stains on her sleeves,
Holding in lies.

She fixes her hair,
And walks out the door,
Grabbing her black jacket.
Going to get more.

She takes a sniff,
And then she's done,
Looks under the bed,
And pulls out a gun.

She gets out some paper,
And writes her goodbyes,
Telling why she has to go,
Confessing all her lies.

She lays it on the ground,
Puts the gun to her head,
She pulls the trigger,
And falls on the bed.

Copyright © Avery A.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    I loved your poem. I liked the way it flowed together. 5/5!!! If get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think

  • 18 years ago

    by Psychotic Heart

    Amazing! I'm speechless. I don't know what to write, that was just a major "woah". Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by pale angel

    I LOVE THIS POEMS

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow, this is like amazing, i love the way you say it all just so, you don't hide it behind anything you just say it as it is, as what she does, i love it

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. the fact that you don't go into the reasons for her death makes it all the more powerful.