by avery Aug 25, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She walks down the halls, |
I loved your poem. I liked the way it flowed together. 5/5!!! If get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think |
Amazing! I'm speechless. I don't know what to write, that was just a major "woah". Keep it up. |
by pale angel
I LOVE THIS POEMS |
by Becky
Wow, this is like amazing, i love the way you say it all just so, you don't hide it behind anything you just say it as it is, as what she does, i love it |
Great poem. the fact that you don't go into the reasons for her death makes it all the more powerful. |