I'm sure that if you read some of my poems, you'll realize how we have a lot in common 5/5 Keep strong

~ Tina

Distant poem. Doesn't give away too much which is good. Adds mystery to the poem and has a very good effect on the audience. Amazing poem.
xSarahx

Your writing is very good

O wow. this poem had definite emotion. the rhyming was awesome and you didnt try to force any words.

I have no idea where you get the topics to write about stuff like these i wish i was almost as talented as you..5/5

I still have no idea why she has to go...you are just saying how she go...hmm...maybe I just don't get it...but I still think this poem is nice...really good...

Great poem. the fact that you don't go into the reasons for her death makes it all the more powerful.

Wow, this is like amazing, i love the way you say it all just so, you don't hide it behind anything you just say it as it is, as what she does, i love it

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

I LOVE THIS POEMS

Amazing! I'm speechless. I don't know what to write, that was just a major "woah". Keep it up.

I loved your poem. I liked the way it flowed together. 5/5!!! If get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think