by JJ Aug 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Drowned in a bath tub |
Wow I loved this poem although it was so sad. It brought tears to my eys. Your word choice it great. I gave it a five. I was wondering if I can add you to my favorites [ I always ask the auther as a curtsy before I actually add them] If its not to much to ask can you check out my poems and tell me what you think becuase I as a great poet you might be able to help me. =) |
by alicia
Great poem, We don't ask to be here? its our parents, they want us...its just not right to be treated as the way you explaned. will great poem |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is such a powerful piece. Your words echo my very thoughts. Being from Oklahoma, I remember the Precious Doe case vividly! I honestly don't understand people, if we can even call them that! |
by Andrea
WOW. this poem almost made me cry. its so sad. i agree parents shouldnt do that. if they didnt want the child they could have gave him/her a better home. |
OMG, this is really so very sad, you manged to say so much about such a sad topic in a short space. Brilliant! I wish there were more caring people around in the world like you. |