I like the style and idea, better if it was longer though:) |
by Bredada
Short and cute opem i should dedicated to my xboyfriend |
by ~Black*Rose~
I will give it a 4/5, it was great, But i don't really like poems that habve lines that repet themselfes, The reason i did give a high rating is because you poem was sincer. |
by Emma
Great poem keep up the good work. |
by Matthew
Hi Nicole, well it was ok. It was short and to the point and it seemed to have strong feeling behind it. The repeating line was ok, but the poem did seem a little choppy at certain points, thats not bad but its something you can notice and improve on 5/5. |
by Drew Gold
I like this,.. there is a lot of feeling behind it of course, but you dont show it.. by the way .,. thought is spelled with a t.. imma look for more of urs.. ill give this one 4/5 |
This was awesome! i know how you feel! omg that was awesome, i mean it didnt rhyme but it was great!! i loved it 5/5 for sure! |
by None
This was too simple and not very fun to read...nothing was major,no descriptive words...sounds more like a one sided conversation than anything. |
by wendy
I like this poem it is simple and down to the point this is.. 1 |
by M MEM
This is pretty good, too many I's though. still pretty good |
by Lenny
Thats cute, i love how its so short and so to the point which makes it awesome |
Truly sensational. |
by crystal
I really like it. it was a little short but it was still good. great job |
by SweetSuicide
I like the stlye of the poem..and it flowed really well..great poem..5/5 |
by Andrea
Eh i didnt have to much interest in this poem. it was ok but it could have been better. |
by morgan
I luv this so much |
Again.. i didn't really get it, it was really short and got to the point, but it was pretty much just repeating the same thing. |
by HansRik
Very good, though short, very eomtive and powerful. I like it a lot. The words are accurate (though a small grammatical error in the third line, you forgot to capitalise the "i") The flow could be a bit better, but this is simply wonderful. Keep it up! |
Very good ,short and got to the point |
by Goth
Thats Serious! again a few lines a little long but over all, very well writtin. |