Short and sweet could be longer but you did and awesome job on this one..5/5

Very.....interesting poem.

Aw this is sad....kinda sweet for some reason though....short.....nothing special about it so i'd say a 4

Awwl.. very sweet. I loved it, Nice flow and perfect ending. I hope you showed them this because its great. Had me from begining to end 5/5!~ BRitBrat