Ahh,.. that was great.. i loved the flow and the message was real, entwined with beautiful visions.. this was great.. honestly.. i wish i could write like that.. pZ out 5/5

I totally agree with you...not that things will ever change..well maybe some day when the end of the world comes. theres just so much media..and so much perfection being expressed through it. looking at magizines these days is really depressing. great message through this poem. I really like it. n thanks so much for your comment.
Christina

Deeply Written, Great Choice Of Wording And Formation, Fluid Flow, Precise Point, Enjoyable To Read 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I agree we are who we are even if we sucuumb to plastic surgery underneath you are still the person you were and ur friends and families wont forget the real you

LOved it this pOem is really awsum. Great stuff with a Great msG that really needs tO Get Out. a pOem which many yOunG gurls shOuld read. really well written keep up the Great wOrk! =]

Hey.that is a !great! poem.so true.so many girls try to look like the girls in all of the magazines.
i loved it.keep up the good work.
Tes

I loved the messege your trying to send out...all girls should read this!
xxxx