by Love Fallacy Aug 25, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Your smile that I picture in my mind, |
by C Cattaway
Little declaration of love. Short & sweet. No specific flow, in the beginning, just like love, yet towards the end, I felt it was more important to rhyme, than to be fluent. A bold choice, for a first poem, & a great reminder of how much you've changed & learned to reach where you are now. Good write x |