I think this is really beautiful, it has no particular rhyme scheme and it's not complex yet the imagery and your descriptions were astounding and vivid. A really nice piece of work. Keep it up and try to feel better.
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5/5 great work

Aww hun. Are you ok????

Not bad, but it needs a little work. try putting in some periods or commas.4/5

I like this alot, It doesn't have a rhyme scheme, yet flows well. If you really feel like this, may I suggest something to make you feel better, Find something to believe in, or a dream. For me it's animal rights and the dream of going to this boarding school next year that noone thinks I can get into. Anyway, after I found something to believe in life just got better and better. anyway, great poem