Omg wow. as if my writing even comes close to being better then yours...your very talented...keep it up and i hope your ok . take care x x

So much emotion, And very well expressed...the flow is diffrent but it works well.
I liked the way at parts it went just two words. ex. "I'm scared, I'm lonely, I'm hurt, I'm tired" It keeps the reader interested I liked it Lol :D
I also really enjoyed this part "it all on me, its all my fault
i made my heart into a vault" its a good way of explaining it.

Well done on this I really enjoyed reading it x)

Wow...you expressed so many feelings in this poem, its just great! Really nice job! You really have talent boy! So, keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this beautiful poems with us!