by ~Black*Rose~ Aug 26, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Tomorrow I start High School. |
by Britney
Awwl.. soo sad I moved in the 10th grade it was ruff for me also i left all my friends behind and someone specail also.. no one will ever take his place. xox goodluck xox 5/5 nice poem~ |
by Andrea
Very good, i kinda know how you feel, it sucks. |
by Jamie
You said be honest and i dont want to be mean but like this is SO SIMPLE...there are no good words in this piece the best word i think there is, is madly when you used it to describe how in love you were....and it dosn't rhyme. i know poems dont HAVE to rhyme but if your not using food words or any metaphors i think its definatly a quality enhancer....wasn't my favorite id love to say great job and everything but im not really into this all that much i think you have alot of feelings and strong emotions and i think you could word them better if you just tried to |
The sentences sound weird. But it's content is great. |
It was pretty good! you can see your emotion in this and can really feel how yo ufeel about the whole thing, its very well written! 5/5 |