I like this but I think the "but no" and "psh" push the flow off. Also you having a different number of lines in your stanzas so often threw it off. That happens to kids so often though, I know it happened to me many times. I went to a bunch of different schools. Nice write....

I like this poem bucuz i justed moved and i just started high school and i just realized that i was in love w/ someone so 5/5 good job.

It was pretty good! you can see your emotion in this and can really feel how yo ufeel about the whole thing, its very well written! 5/5

The sentences sound weird. But it's content is great.

You said be honest and i dont want to be mean but like this is SO SIMPLE...there are no good words in this piece the best word i think there is, is madly when you used it to describe how in love you were....and it dosn't rhyme. i know poems dont HAVE to rhyme but if your not using food words or any metaphors i think its definatly a quality enhancer....wasn't my favorite id love to say great job and everything but im not really into this all that much i think you have alot of feelings and strong emotions and i think you could word them better if you just tried to

Very good, i kinda know how you feel, it sucks.

Awwl.. soo sad I moved in the 10th grade it was ruff for me also i left all my friends behind and someone specail also.. no one will ever take his place. xox goodluck xox 5/5 nice poem~