I like how you have that one sentence ta the end, it really sends out the message and touches my heart. i'm not really into poems taht don't rhym, but that doesn't mean it wasn't good. keep it up

THATS REALLY GOOD !!

great job id say!

i love it
it is kinds true for me too!!

5/5

Oww this is really really good and really sad. ever need to talk im here just pm me... chin up hun
luv always smiling oxoxo

Dis is another good poem that u av wrote. i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work

Wow..i like it.. i didn't think i'd like ht eset up of it because sometimes they're hard to read but this really reached out. so sad..
hope you're ok hun..you need to know none of this pain should be caused by another person...please don't hurt yourself..
luv xoxo