by Shinnade Aug 26, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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by BrokenMisery
Well first of all it doesn’t deserve a 3 (as previously voted). Its not exactly poetry but descriptive writing or prose with some interesting features. I like your many uses of personification and linking your words and ideas. A good title that matches what you’re explaining without being overly mentioned in the text. Some good interesting ideas and choice of structure. Keep it up. |