This IS AMAZING. I had not suspected that with how you started this poem. It's all perfectly worded and it flows BRILLIANTLY and it's so magnificent. I love how you describe everything that you're describing, you can get a really good picture of the woman. :-). Great write Renee, I hope this isn't true for someone you know. Take care hun. Love you!! xoxox

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx

Wow, I love it, it's honest and open and true for so many people. I admire your touch and hope your gift continues to grow. Take care hunni,
xXxForesakenxXx

Wow...this really surprised me. You just described the life of SO MANY women. LAME a-ss women but in all fairness WOMEN.It seems to have been written so effortlessly as it flows beautifully....excellent write miss nay...

Nice poem, Renee. I liked the way you portrayed an abused woman here as beaten perfection. Covering bruises, drunken punches. Superb!