She closes her eyes and i die

by shae r   Aug 26, 2005


Her silent screams deafen me
Her burning tears scorch my skin
Her breaking heart leaves me empty
I feel her hurting within

The image she sees in the mirror makes me sick
The baggage she carrys weighs me down
The skin she cuts leaves my arm bleeding
She falls and I hit the ground

The pain she feels leaves me breathless
The guilt she feels makes me cry
She takes a deep breath and my head starts to spin
She closes her eyes and I die

(c) Shae Radford

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    Love it! It's amazing, keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    OMG... such a great poem! you did a beautiful job. it was so... i cant find my wordz. i guess ill come back to you when i find them. lol *5/5*

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    :( that's really emotive - lovely piece. Thanks for your comment.

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Aww Your Talking About Yourself, How Sad And Creative 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by alyssa

    Wow that was amazing.
    you are one hell of a writer.
    There are honestly no words to describe that poem.
    Pure brilliance.
    You should honestly get your poems published.
    alyssa

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