God damn! that was brilliant and really original. I love the way this is written (altho' if you want my honest opinion the rhythm isnt quite perfect) in such a way so as you dont know what the meaning behind the poem is because there's just so many things it could stand for. I love reading inspiring pieces like this, it gives me what I need to keep writing. Well done,
xXxForesakenxXx

Omg man, frikin gud poem...it's short, but beautiful...keep up the good work...

Short but powerful
i rewally really liked it!
there was really good rhyming adn flowed well
great job keep it up

Its awesome
i liked it
maybe u could read my poems now !!!

thank

Wow that was amazing.
you are one hell of a writer.
There are honestly no words to describe that poem.
Pure brilliance.
You should honestly get your poems published.
alyssa

Aww Your Talking About Yourself, How Sad And Creative 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

:( that's really emotive - lovely piece. Thanks for your comment.

emma x

OMG... such a great poem! you did a beautiful job. it was so... i cant find my wordz. i guess ill come back to you when i find them. lol *5/5*

Love it! It's amazing, keep up the good work!