Wow Great poem....your meesage is strong and clear.
My fav verses were :
Once again I ask myself
Once again I think
Its only a matter of time
Till we are extinct

Without the system is catastrophe
Without money would be Blasphemy
Because we don't know how to live
is why we have money we don't know how to give

To me the message really came out the strongest in those verses. I also really like the word play.
Wat ppl don't realize is that we will be the endangered species if we do not take care of this world and ALL the ppl in this world. 5/5 Great Job!!!