by gorgeouslilmissy Aug 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tonight i don't want to sleep. |
by .tiana ღ laura.
I loved your poem and thought it was beautiful, especially the ending... i loved the last couple lines! |
by amelia
Awesome....so sad...so deep so much hurt... |
by Shy
Again the lines are slightly choppy but thats ok |
by NannO
That was so heart-breaking and full of sad emotion.. i hope ur OK, nothing is worse than having to lose a best friend.. ur rhyme was gr8 and ur choice of words gud.. i especially lyk ur last 2 lines |
Mysterious start, Brilliant finish.. Great Writing! |