Interesting...

You could never be woman because you have the mentality of a man. Women are so much more than sexual beings. I think it's gross the way you portray us as a manipulative gender

Well, tinkerbell, i never did intend to portray the womenfolk as manipulative - on the contrary i wanted to show a good number of men off as egoistic - i was on your side!

Very true smuel... i think you've done a wonderful job... this poem has a lot of meaning -- i guess it just depends on a person's perception.... but i think it was great...
hoping the best for you

love,
ipsita

Very very good written...
you got the talent...
keep it up!